Echo and Narcissus

You call

  he feels faint ripples roll
      reflections spreading

         sterile pond

            his inward eyes

   submergent selves

two loves   unheard:

  you    fade

                     he     blurs

Echo and Narcissus © Copyright 2021, Robert J. Tiess.

View this poem at

23 words (prompt limit). Unloved brevity challenge prompt - link:
Submitted: April 15, 2020