Echo and Narcissus


You call

  he feels faint ripples roll
 
      reflections spreading

         sterile pond

            his inward eyes

   submergent selves

two loves   unheard:

  you    fade

                     he     blurs




Echo and Narcissus © Copyright 2021, Robert J. Tiess.

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Submitted: April 15, 2020









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